Oh, I missed this post. I also wrote a lot before getting into the game's mechanics. Though, that's the point of the game. :) To inspire to write.

I wasn't sure what cleansing a house really looked like, so this helps a lot! I liked the touch of her father's house pennant flag. I'm always curious to learn more about a character's history. I also caught the reference to her mother in the other post.

Well, this is the end of my read. I'm looking forward to your next posts!